My SW fan-fic

CHAPTER ONE

Rever Fett knew it had been a bad idea landing at Tatooine as soon as he had done just that. He walked into the local cantina, but there seemed to be a fight going on. He came in at just the right time, because at that moment, a stormtrooper was sent headlong out the door. Rever just managed to duck. When he got up from the floor, everthing was chaotic. Security troops surounded him. He still did'nt know what was going on, but he figured he had about as much chance as not to get away. The troops had they're guns pointed at him, so sneaking away was out of the question. Apparently they had not noticed he still had his pistols, so he swiftly pulled them out and fired randomly at troopers. As he did so, a Wookiee grabbed his arms and threw him against the wall. Since Rever was still in his armor, hitting the wall caused the button on his jetpack to ignite, and he was sent hurling skyward, through the ceiling.
Inside the cantina, the Wookiee wondered why his enemy was'nt around anymore. Meanwhile, Rever was'nt having the time of his life. As soon as he gained control of his flight, he shut off the engine and landed heavily outside of the cantina. Again, stormtroopers gathered around him.
"You're under arest," said the lead trooper, standing over him.
"I was under the impression that you stayed at your stations in the cantina. and your orders where to let the outer security troops take care of the outside."
"Come on now," the captain said. "We have orders to arrest you."
"Me?" Rever asked incredulisticaly. "Just me in particular?"
"Move it!"

Pretty good but it needs to be longer!

Yeah, thats mostly just a small bit of the first chapter. I'll edit it to make it a bit longer.

Hmm i like it its ok but who is the wokkie can you describe Feet more?